her below: Please correct all sentence errors. WRITING ASSIGNMENT And also for the Week 8

Hell othis is a English 1301 home work post that has two separate  parts.. THe Week 8 discussion post and the Writing assignment . I will post the discussion post her below: Please correct all sentence errors. WRITING ASSIGNMENT And also for the Week 8  Revising and editing writing assignment read the attach file i uploaded to know more of the writing and what to do ..if you need the english book i can give you the info login .(Basically we have a chance pick an week essay to revise and get a better grade, so I chose week 6 to redo over for week 8 assignment) thanks